Feedback on our thriller idea

PART TWENTY NINE

Feedback

• Rather than shooting some shots of the mother from foot-first on, the majority of the bath shots will be taken from the daughters perspective through the keyhole.  The angle of the bath will look like this:

 and the outlines of the keyhole will look like this:

• We also found out that it is not possible to shoot at Leathhill Place anymore so we are looking for a suitable location around Surrey. We are looking for a large old Victorian home in which a we will shoot the daughter walking up the stairs to see her mother. The only spaces which are going to be shot in are the hallway, the staircase and the bathroom. We are looking to shoot somewhere like this:

• Originally, there were going to be a few shots of the daughter walking around the house calling her mother's name. This proves to be a bit repetitive and tedious, so, we will have the opening shot as Evangeline (the daughter) walking up the stairs on to the landing. She will stand there and hear running water. In the next shot she will walk to the bathroom door and look through the keyhole. This is how our first few shots will look.

 

 

• The feedback team told us that it is very unlikely someone could or would drown themselves in a bath. So, the woman, (Evangeline's mother) will slit her wrists first and let the blood run into the water. The girl will then open the door slightly to reveal a shot similar to this: