PART TWENTY SEVEN
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Idea 2
For my second idea it became clear that there were no classrooms with windows at my college which were low and which someone could climb out of. So perhaps if it started not in a classroom but in someone's bedroom and then she could wake up in the morning, see her friend out the window and then climb out. This would be easier because houses are a lot more accessible to find for filming than schools are.

People also suggested to me that instead of the girls being teenagers maybe they could be children between the ages of 6 and 10. This would create the sense of youthfulness and freedom that the song is trying to convey and the imagery of children playing and having fun works better than with teenagers.

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